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]Bitch u getting this K, If u have any courage u'll need that
Ur life hangs in the balance of my chopper like an emergency evac

Haha had something like this I was toying w but never got off the floor. Nice.

Fuck your cunt of a mother, u love her? ..she gettin her shit split
im twisted, gun butter til her face is smeared all over the biscuit

Yikes. This was tuff.

This ain't no mutherfuckin battle, I'll free & breeze
Ur not tough as a MF'er <<thats where ur goin wit the EMTs

This is more of a visual play....which I'm not a big fan of

I'm the don of slugs, how u want it- long or snubbed I get down
An oblongata leave that section of your brain scattered around

I don't think that's how that word is pronounced but I like this lol

I'll bust a bottle over ya head like Im tryin christen a ship
& its automatic that no one'd care cuz they aint fuckin wit stick

Half name flip...don't love these either....was ok

Ill spray & strafe, wanna kno where u hit? Follow the burns
5 sent from the can leave holes in u the size of bottle returns

Like this




I come through with 2 burners. Clips loaded ready to steal shit./
When I push these two 5s on his chest hel get light headed real quick./

Missing this if it's got a double meaning

Ill shit, chill wit shooters. Them killers is who I know. /
I send two shooters and They shootin/shoot in for/4 k like the new iPhone/

This is ok......pro tip.....we r all pretty deep in the game here so generally u don't need to break ur wordplays down.....take for instance Kenny oblong gat uh....bar above. It looks so much cleaner an more confident to just drop the wordplay an say fuck it....the real voters will get this. An conversely alot of people will hate on explanations in verses like that just cuz it feels noobish an also undermines the intelligence of the audience.


I chop his body into 8 bits. This that Atari flow./
Then il put this bitch in a box, that's a barbie doll./

8 bits is nuuuuuts.....barbie is played....should've switched order of lines

The nine pitch black. Call it my safari hoe./
And it leave yo ass flat out bodied like paper Mario./

Lol fuckin w this


Got a loaded eagle. And it go off for nothing like a pregnant bitch/
And I brought shells if he got beef like we eating with Mexicans/

Again....ur set up was fresher an more fire then ur punch line here for me....shells was played

Dog you a bitch. Kenney ain't ready he can't hack what I'm dishin./
Mag fully packed. And he can get the full clip like a brazzers subscription/

Played



Aight so mf suffered from the same things he has in past weeks here....mainly determining wat is and isn't played in a heavily saturated gun line realm....also line placement. Although that goes along w the prior. I thought 8 bit an paper Mario were bonkers. ....I also think on rmbva u guys take a looser more live approach which has u doing more longer winded set ups an a Lotve throw away bars but I think something that nc has done in really condensing our punches and making every bar hit as hard as we can really caters to this shorter bar length type of battle. If u guys were doing like 3 minute rounds here a couple barbie in a box lines wouldn't matter....but wen u only got 12 lines to make a point every single one should be ether. Kenny chopper line was cool.....the biscuit bar had me w the yuck face ha...was lotb for me....oblongata lol this gets the arachnaphobia award of the week again.....liked it tho. Good battle...was it sum tweaking mf could be a title contender.

V kenny