finny whatchu doin bro that vocoder shit is dope, the whole hook is dope really, and so is your delivery really, not as dope as the hook but, you sound confident. but man those lyrics are just not cuttin it. and the outro is a little much, i dont like the electric guitar, i can get someone to do an actual elec guitar solo that'd be way doper.
i dont fuck with the other one but you should give me that first one to do the verses justice ;)
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