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Old 05-14-2013, 12:38 PM   #8
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i enjoyed what these lines were sewn with, together with an almost tongue-in-cheek attitude at times

puncture your hopes. penetrate her pussy or heart
when neither one was good from the start, pulling your card


that one stung. me... for some reason. frozen cartridge that wouldn't restart/ was also stellar (very concise if you attempt to unravel, too). lines varied from good, to great ^^^ to a couple eh/awkward ones. overall: strong, good read.
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