[Pharaohs Army]

U know what Gina?, I think this is good.
And from the looks of it it must have inspired part of me to write a little verse.

On the face of it your writing here looks simple, but it's not simple-- you had attention to details/flow, etc.

Also good because (to me) it can be kind of spoken, or actually rapped.

I read this as definitely out of the pocket (slightly behind or ahead of the beat). Welcome to the club; it gets lonely around here, but I shall have to read more pieces by other people before I speak too soon.
(I mean, I write/rap both ways, but I think I employ out-of more than in-pocket).

As you can tell I have been mainly commenting positively on the style.
Content? On it's face it's not earth-shattering emotion, nor is it a narrative..
Maybe just a blueprint
But a cryptic line like We can start war and bring peace back to earth gives the reader some wiggle room for interpretation. Or at the very least gives off an aura of depth lol.

*Edit: But if you keyed this in 2minutes trying to be a typical textstyler then you mind as well let me know right now so I can quit life.

&Glad you found some humor in my discussion-thread female Battle mockup.