This was well written. More poetic than rap like. I really dig these lines here man.
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United we stand in divided states of mind, and the common man
is a titan, given party favors, a hat and an olive branch
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History serves as reminder for how things go downhill quick
while ours reminds us for the need of a kill switch.
Laws created under our nose, leaves us tickled with quill pens
we won't mind till the euphoria feel ends
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really dope piece throughout. I cant say much negative about this, technically not impressive. However that said, everything else in this was so vivid that multies, internals, and all the other jazz wasnt even in question. There was so much imagery to this piece it that its becomes pretty captivating to read.
Great stuff. I thouroughly enjoyed this here. Props dude.