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Old 05-04-2016, 10:42 PM   #142
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Originally Posted by Joe Boston View Post
True lol wanted to add more character thats my issue think to much visually lol

I have the same problem some time. Trying to do too much. Multi-layered concepts can work but it's gotta be done worded immaculately and come across unforced. Most of the time they just come across convoluted or straight messy. Less is more, which is why I fucked with that bar. It was slick and direct. But everyone is looking for different things when judging.
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