[Mr. J]

MMLP, I really enjoyed the touch of magic you spun in this.
you worked the topic nicely & really created a fun image.
there is a common riff between these 2 as far as musical craft
but most enthusiasts would swear the proof is in the fans.
apples & oranges, two different levels of artistry expressed
that is the fun part of having different tastes, awkwardly said.
I enjoy the flow in which you showcased, this shit is smooth
its good to see you back..that musical divide flip is cool.

Adverse, you bring up a topic I spoke about this past weekend.
which makes it cool that you used it, the flow pattern is decent
you keep a steady build up throughout the whole verse that works.
the quick line & syllable count make it enjoyable word for word.
a lot of people take the abstract route but the direct approach is smooth
after the first 20 lines I felt like my mind was just coasting though.
you crafted a well knit quilt that wrapped me up as I read on.
welcome to the show partna, call him baby & put some respeck on em...


v/Adverse, I really enjoyed both verses & their approach
if MMLP wrote an extra 10 lines Id gauge this match very close.
& yet Adverse came with a 4 course meal that hit hard & fast
I was quickly immersed in his story no matter where I started at.
it was a long piece but it was well worth the read for a contenders match
both brought some heat though, thats word to slender man.