[Schadenfreude]

Originally Posted by Wanderer

Wasn't feeling much of this verse, the wording through off most of your concepts. While on the other hand the concepts probably wouldn't be very damaging, even w/ better wording..they were too basic imo. Still tho not a terrible showing, just mediocre to average.

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Originally Posted by Barcotic

Decent although it read as a really simple keystyle. This didn't have any of your usual haymakers, just a couple of solid bars & duds. Luckily for u Wand didn't offering any severe counters, so u dropped "good enough".

Overall CROBAR edges.