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Old 05-01-2016, 10:06 AM   #7
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Boston:
Your from a school of pussies just get da fuc out my face
Come to Boston College,Player 2 9 poppin watch u die young like Ron Brace
^ I see what you were doing here and it was a solid opener.

Left me with a bitter taste about u your that certain type of gay
If i see the bitch that raised u May 8 hit her body so u can mourn this Mothers Day
^ Okay.

Play with his emotions on the daily if he continues to talk that gunplay
Id even ask his Bird Man she say u dumb af how u gonna get respect with a K
^ Think this could have been worded better.

Your wife says u dont pay one bill in the crib its a disgrace how u live
She suppose to manage with Sharp Chedda? broke fuck cant even keep Cracker Barrel in the fridge
^ Alright.

Are your kids straight whens the last time they ate? this deadbeats never in sight
Wife knows ur saving balance zero so dont go to the bank teller u fucking stumble at life
^ Nah b.

U living trife when the last time u smelled that drug money
If i pulled out my gun Andrew, Jackson for everything even take his face off for that twenty
^ cool concept but the overall bar had little impact.

Bring nothing new to the table flipping old shit and its funny
Hand him a Pure L fag probably rub it over himself like Danny Devito in Always Sunny
^ ehhhhh

Sharp:
The entire league wants you gone. I'll crush you w/ no indifference
This week's 'For Your Pain & Suffering'. De La's new EP was no coincidence
^ alright, solid. Nothing too crazy but a cool reference.

acting like dudes say 'v/joe' on the reg. the thought has me dead, bitch
You just been Cruz'in w/ the votes? lol. THAT would be a fucked up Convention
^ ehhh I see what you were going for but it wasn't really executed that well.

you're posting ur boner fuel? Soft bitch. ain't set for war son
Post all your gay porn in chat. you STILL won't be Hard in this forum
^ feels played to me.

stay beggin for Anthony's love - him not hating you would be a personal victory
You post a double handjob pic but you on Bags was the most jerking in NBL history
^I didn't feel this really

mini freakout turning into depression got me wonderin... what you smokin brother?
had yourself lots of ups n downs this week... n it wasn't just while lookin at the guys strokin each other
^ ehhh

Delusional & bipolar, you're diseased and everyone can see it son
It's fitting - I'm putting on a clinic while you badly need to be in one
^ solid solid.

+ your boy OD'd while you were netceeing? You're scum, thats clear my dude
I know you struggle with wording but how hard is it to say 'I'm here for you'?
^ Good closer.

This was actually one of the better verses i've seen from Boston, now if only his wording didn't mess up a couple of those lines he could have pulled off the upset, his first set of 4 were solid and the cracker barrel one. Sharp had the opener and the 4 closing bars so I got 6 for both and I think Sharp edged here, I know you're a dope battler Sharp but this verse felt really rushed to me. And all the generic 'you're gay' bars didn't really have much an impact or were clever enough. Regardless, Sharp gets the W here.

V/Sharp
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