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Old 04-27-2016, 08:52 PM   #11
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In my opinion, Mr. J took this one.

Nothing wrong with Breathless's verse, I just didn't find a clear cut topic and that's what mattered most to me, though Breath did a good job with imagery and description, I found myself more involved with Mr. J's piece and was able to visualize more to it and relate, this was a great battle though and you both are very great at doing your thing. Good bout fellas.

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