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Old 04-27-2016, 01:19 PM   #7
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Interesting read from both here. I can see this going either way depending on preference.

Personally, I thought sym's mechanics were a little better. His verse stayed more consistent. While Asylum's piece was cool, I felt the flow lost a bit in the middle, though it picked back up towards the end.

Overall, I got a slightly more polished verse in sym that edges this, for me.

v/ Symetrik
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