Sim city, cool read, I think I've said this before but you have tons of potential you just need to find your voice. Your style is rampant yet coordinated and I think most people love that shit. Weird concept/story for me to get into personally here, I honestly don't know what to think.
A lion, started off dope, everything came natural to you until you didn't know where you were gonna take your verse. The middle and ending were choppy, hard to get into.
Weird battle. Banksy deserves the best tho. I almost want to give it to aslyum for his ambition but I just feel that sym takes this on a more thought out read and more of a complete read. I don't think aslyums mechanics here also couldn't keep up. Slightly.
V. Symetrik
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