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Old 04-26-2016, 10:34 PM   #4
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Pardon my brevity.

Decent read. Not completely satisfied with either's interpretation. Asylum was much closer in terms of depicting his version, even though it is all up for interpretation, I just appreciate when a writer actually nails the picture. Again, neither really did that. Interesting usage of Spanish by Symetrick. Fiesty writing. I just preferred Asylum verse with the above picture a little more. Plain and simple.

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