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Old 04-24-2016, 07:04 PM   #6
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I've read your verses. I've never seen such worse bull.
I'll have this bitch surrounded by so many barrels u'd think it was a Jim bean commercial.

Eh this is ok

Stick to online dating, the last girl u met took off and hurled.
Any woman experiencing Wanderlust is probably running away across the world.

Ok

You don't have a single notable win, every one of your accomplishments' minor.
Nigga, you're not the Future of this league everyone thinks you're more like Desiigner.

Eh

My finger's on the trigger, I'm itchin' to use the handguns bad.
And have your homies pouring out more liquor than Lil Wayne in that Samsung ad.

Cool

I'm stay giving dimes some deep dick and putting them to sleep quick.
Ur girls are ugly cuz whenever a Wand comes out, it's usually followed by a cheap trick.

Lol aight

This battle isn't fair, no one thinks this lame could intrigue.
It makes sense that we call u Wanderer when u can't seem to find a place in this league.

Ok





I'm young & in my prime while u washed up & don't go hard, u wack
New Age so damn badly & no chick listens when you claim to be part of that

Wording way off

Drive by with the tec & I'm poppin. hit dudes chest & I'll drop him
When u laid out flat in the road people stop in their tracks, pedestrian crossin

Ehhhh this is ok

Getting calls from foreign numbers from chicks who want me to hit it
U got 0 chance to fuck Abroad no matter how many countries you visit

Played

Got too much cash to spend so the chicks stay loyal to my patch
If they say u associated with deep pockets it's in reference to ur girls snatch

Eh

this faggot talkin straps and cash, man I swear this dude lies
Tells thugs the heat'll have em lifted then takes em on hot air balloon rides

Concepts cool....I don't like the way u took it tho

Creep in ur house while U writing wack bars. The gat do more than just hurt ya
There'll be blood & gore all over Newsdesk like a TV anchor reporting on murder

Too wordy



This was light on both ends. Nothing here really blew me away. Blam wording was better tho and was the difference maker imho.


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