Joe's shit was alright, I know some of the other dudes said you should try wording things differently, not sure what you mean by "come to the bean" lol. Wacky stuff, needs some work but I'll give you points on creativity.
Bags was alright, vs. seemed pretty rushed, Boston Marathon predictable. Some of the punches hit and others missed, dangerous kids and Dr. Octavius doesn't rhyme tho. Still had to give it to Bags because it was a proper battle verse.
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