[Ghost1]

I'll get in ur face n watch u turn bitch, then tap ur dome n ur chin, nerd
It'll Have this whole league viewing Free as a bird now,,,, no Lynyrd Skynyrd

Wording sucked

N last week u got trashed geek, s'like u never could land shit
The way u just didn't touch bags, I thought u was tryna better the planet

Preciate that. But nah this shit is wack.

Evey1 got a thing fa doe, Even broke cats hustle for a buck when they're hungry
Ull try the cheeseburger skit, so when it fails n u can display how ur a sucker fa money

Little wordy but this ur best so far

Where I'm from net geeks get F'd with, so I write this text shit on the low
Fag'll invite 20 headz for netcees n popcorn, knowin every1 on the guest list gonna show

Lmfao this is such a weird bar lolol

Electronics fucked ur head up, s'why u never felt breasts pal
So u can blame technology, why bitches avoid cashier n go straight to self check out

This is.....ok


I’ll get ya whole family in the same shot – that’s a Christmas card
I hit em hard, you can find Shanks in the dirt like a prison guard

BANGARANG

Should I give him bars or shots when I’m grippin the handle?
Only time you grippin a handle is tryna fuck ya bish … liftin her handles

Lol eh....wording sucked to me....an love handles flips r played

He had to settle for shit cuz he was on tinder posin like a white knight
How ironic the guy named shanks couldn’t get a swipe right

Okish

That legion verse wasn’t even dirt, shanks shoulda dropped this hobby
Your only win on the Lime scene was a crime scene – just a drawn out body

I want this to work so much lol. But the drawn out body part don't make sense to me....like u should've included something about the win taking forever to get votes...or being drawn out in sum way etc


Now son is done, like a Calipari player – you’ll be one and done
Gave ya 9 lines, this last one a bonus cuz now you one and one

Eh






All in all both were a bit clunky. I'm gonna edge it to SFC just cuz his opening bar was fire as fuck to me. Love the double punch style. Shanks u got the general idea but u need to work on more elaborate concepts coupled with more concise wording to really make ur punches land


V sfc