Innovator...
Got your feet wet. Decent effort. I really liked the stable/wave pull lines. You had a vast oceanic idea, but you came through with a kiddy pool. Looking for you to make a bigger splash in the upcoming weeks.
Jesodist...
Circa 2001 message board flow... classic. Only advice is polish. Edit your pieces with a viewers/readers perspective. Work on making the final product more reader friendly.
MVGT Jesodist
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