Adverse...
Cool comic book narration. Straight forward, edgy. Dope twist. Night and day, in comparison.Real, relatable, felt old school.
Breathless...
Brutal. Execution wasn't really there, but the premise was sick. Schemes weren't properly aligned, but I saw what you were trying to do there. Introduction is important, though it isn't a make or break factor when looking at the bigger pic.
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