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Pharaohs Army thanks for reading this. It was more a release of frustration written in a fit of rage that anything, kind of poured of me. I agree with pretty much everything you said, 12 I've debated taking out multiple times, but a few lines are very personal to me, so I will probably rework it. In fact a lot of this will probably reworked, it's one of those things where I almost wish I would've tried to actually write a strong piece with an attention to detail because I find it harder to rework something than to just write something new. But I am somewhat of a perfectionist and there are several things not perfect here, so a rework is inevitable for me. Using 'some' twice like that had completely went over my head and I didn't notice I did that, and now it's bugging me as well. Haha I'm going to have to start this tonight or I won't be able to sleep. Anyway thank you again