V/ Frank
Triple0 this sucked man... you spend more time&effort on cypher keys and you know it.
I've seen some good shit from you, so I don't know what the hell you were trying to do here, other than make a statement about how you're too cool for school.
Franklin,
Occasionally you're uber-rhyming works against you,
like in this1, as this got towards the end.
flammable ramble
Stop.
You're better.
Meh, kinda cool verse... But tbh if you faced anything really good you probly would have lost.
I'm guessing you were saving some energy for the next round?
I'm not being negative just to be negative guys.
Just the way it is.
Anyway Frank, nice imagery and descriptions, some cool phrases &rhymes. Tramp got trampled so I think u hit the topic
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