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Old 04-17-2016, 11:45 AM   #10
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Catch 'em at the crib & blow his brains all inside of the place
Hipster ear ring replacement how I put that gage to the side of his face

The chopper'll have u learning how to walk again. Click n squeeze'n
This Rocket Power have u reliving ur childhood for a WHOLE different reason

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Cred got the corner on lock? nah my Cowboys a give u a run for ya cash, geek
the way ill have a Dez runnin routes on u, u'll start havin flashbacks of last week
Girls hate u with a passion, they've spent their whole lives dodgin' you
face it dude, u were never able to put a dent in the pink like it was majin buu

closer to me than the votes are showing, but I got cred edging this slightly. his lines i didn't quote were stronger than wear shhh's lines that i didn't quote. Although I thought the domestic abuse line had potential, rhyme scheme just didn't work for me (dismantle you two/domestic abuse).

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