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Old 04-17-2016, 11:06 AM   #13
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I got Unfuckwitable taking this... felt his verse overall had better attempts...

CBA had the Grey Poupon line (which I didn't think was as 'fire' as everyone else seems to, probably why i have a losing record tho lol) and his opener i thought was cool. everything else was pretty basic in concept and just wasn't effective to me. Unfuckwitable didn't have a slamming verse but his punches were more consistent and overall more creativity from him. His opener, the snoop/dre line, and his closer i thought were cool.

v/ Unfuckwitable
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