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Old 04-17-2016, 09:15 AM   #12
Orc
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Joes opener was a nice concept. Snapchat was okay too. Meet ya doesnt rhyme with features though. I expected really good rhyming here considering you said my perfect slant rhymes were off. Overall you need to cut out the extra words in ya verses so that you can fulfil your potential. Make your verses more concise. Allen had the baccarat line which was cool and the video converter was funny. Opener was nice too actually. AK didn't go in too hard on Joe but he knew what to do to win.

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