this was pretty smooth for the most part...
especially when you get deeper & the flow starts
conducting a little symphony...eh Mozart?
after the second line it starts to go hard...
my issue began when I reached high win...
but I liked it when you continued on with slight risk
entire shtick felt like a forced slant but...
I liked everything before that....
this reminds me of the conversation you had with pharoah
about seeing the rhymes in advertisements on barrels
or chalkboards...I dont remember fully but you get the point
heres an *up* for ya brah..hopefully this shits enjoyed
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