Just Write's verse is definitely more flushed out and comprehensive, and it's a really cool take on the subject. Sym's is also a really interesting take, though it felt like it just ended and wasn't really as polished as his piece from last week. Wondering if you just wanted to make sure you showed, totally understandable and appreciated by everyone if so.
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Originally Posted by Symetrik
I am, giver of the saline drip to drum up a clean bill.
Yet she nods her head to morphine like she's never heard of free will.
sick of saving her damn life, giving her pills to fade pain.
crazy that I have to beg my baby not to screw her life up before it takes shape.
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I thought those two spots were really cool, especially the 2nd line in each couplet. Had your verse been closer to the same length, and as fully developed, it would have been much closer to call. Some cool stuff here, but Just's piece was overall better.
v/ Just Write