Mr j,
This was very smooth. One of the better verses I've read from you, you definitely have a great descriptive ability that I applaud. Hope you know the chat and discussion "beef" is all in fun man. Definitely have my respect as a writer. This was a nice piece man.
Asylum, I really enjoyed this and the flow was exceptional. I have to also applaud you for keeping this league going by yourself and writing verses.. I can only imagine how hard that is. While I enjoyed this piece it was almost too abstract if to you will.. I think I've mentioned this before about it being hard to catch some of your pieces meanings. When you write clear cut pieces you are unbeatable, Unfortunately for yoy this week mr. J really did a great job
Mvgt= Mr J for a more clear cut piece imo
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