[Mr. J]

JESODIST, I find it odd you wrote to a topic that you wanted changed
but the overall impact of your verse would have made your topic great!
unfortunately you decided to toy with your opponent & write a different piece
which is cool...I think? but the chance of winning was thrown of instantly.
of course our peculiar friend above finds your piece to be great due to verbiage
but if you want to battle maybe the both of you should join the NBL to prove your worthiness
its odd that you would do this while also rarely voting in the league...
nice work I guess? next week may work better for you... hopefully...

Adverse, from the start of your verse Im impressed with your wording
Its rare to see anyone use actually names in a verse & this is perfect...
you really put some focus into this & came up with a complete story
the flow is on point & the dialogue is smooth, most do it so poorly...
but this feels like a scene that could be read straight out of a book basically
its inspirational to see someone piece something like this together, I say that gratefully
most people have a short attention span & dont see the art in this meticulous craft
but you made me enjoy this from beginning to end. I thank your mysterious ass...

v/Adverse, I almost gave this to JESODIST because of his bars...
nah Im kidding, his verse was written to a topic he didnt want...
but he wrote to it anyway. & thats where he picked up the loss.
Im sure if he stayed focused this battle would have left me in awe...
but nah...Adverse came through with a well crafted piece tbh
he wrote to the topic & used some great mechanics & it was neatly paced
really nice work...JESODIST could have molded a different verse but seemed distracted
so Im giving this to Adverse for having a better verse.........magic...