[Mr. J]

Artifice, to be honest I cant remember if I read your work
but this verse was impressive. you create a sense of worth
you build upon three separate lives & really mend it nice...
ones gift basically gets him through life desensitized
the others have to work for what they want as most do
one is beyond prideful, while the others remain hopeful.
this was smooth from beginning to end with minor slip ups
you weave a wonderful tale & had a great scheme writ up
I applaud your work here man, no complaints tbh
besides its not in my nature for you to see me hate :)

Razah, I HATED this shit, just kidding brah dont get uptight
but this was different from your usual work this seemed pro(fuck life)
your flow is one of the cleanest that Ive recently come across
but this week for me it seems like you threw something off...
in fact this reminds me of a verse I did when I first started in AOWL
but Im not going to delve to deep into that, but honestly...what the hell?
I know you get lazy at times but this was kind of ridiculous even for you
I wanted to see you come through with something slick, I dont believe in you dude...
but we all have our off moments, some more than others...
hopefully you pull it together next week younger brother.

v/Artifice, He came through with a stronger story than Razah
he shelled out 3 lives, while his opponents was focused on papah
which is commendable but if your opponent drops over 30 plus
it would help if you brought more to the table to serve me up.
although I did find Razahs verse enjoyable due to the profanity
hard work & dedication will always trump over any type of vanity


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