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Pharaohs Army · 04-11-2016, 07:43 PM

Joe
Be a man and protect your family this pussy runs to make an escape
If His plan is to Trust The Shooter ill release faster than Royce Da 5'9s mixtape
pretty good. i like the rhyme&decent wordplay
Rock a cape plotting the hero but never at the destination where the fight is
right hand giving your bones a breakthrough each knuckle will affect ya like the Opiode Crisis
good punchline, the one i enjoyed most. & i thought the wordplay worked.
Your a ball of Fright bitch those faggot traits seem to strike a few
Afraid of Ghost, Right Verse? U only come from under ur bed when someone actually writes for you
forced/weak setup and wasn't feeling the wordplay on the punch, unlike the previous
Got some mixed screws in my head dont make me turn the crazy level up to 10
One punch have your Jaw Sailing across the floor youll never feel the same watching Love n Hiphop again
I like the rhyme of it. 2nd time you talkd about punching him tho
I have my suspicions u love men your the most feminant of human beings
I think they know what u Want Ad so ur gonna leave sore without a Car,Boat or house from that magazine
pretty corny but not bad

Adverse:
You ain't hard you amateur, you're a wobbly battler...
Funny he acted like the King of the Street...
......Then we ended up actually seeing a Boston massacre
i like the boston massacre concept on the punch; i.m.o. there are better ways to word the setup, i think these 3 lines could be smoother
Love and hip hop do not conincide, end of discussion
So Tahiry won't be around when this Joe B gets shot down in public
Okay
Catch Boston while he's hobblin', put him in a headlock
Throw em down, curbstomp em until I end up with Red Sox..
def my favorite part of the verse; thought it worked.
I bet your arthiritis is kickin in, and the first stages of menopause
I mean 35?!...And I thought 'senior member' was a bit too harsh..
tbh this verse is probably far better with audio. tricky rhyme (i'm guessing you squeeze was-a-bit-too?) but even if it's rhymeable, I thought the content of this1 was corny&missed
And your game with the women? That shit is feeble right?
Only girls I heard 'sippin joe' same ones who can't sleep at night
good rhyme but content didn't really hit hard

i have to V/Joe
Thought he had a few less misses
Adverse I know is talented person, but perhaps needs to shake off the rust as far as battle arena

04-11-2016, 07:43 PM	#9
Pharaohs Army Banned Join Date: Aug 2014 Posts: 2,956 Battle Record: 6 - 14 Rep Power: 0	Joe Be a man and protect your family this pussy runs to make an escape If His plan is to Trust The Shooter ill release faster than Royce Da 5'9s mixtape pretty good. i like the rhyme&decent wordplay Rock a cape plotting the hero but never at the destination where the fight is right hand giving your bones a breakthrough each knuckle will affect ya like the Opiode Crisis good punchline, the one i enjoyed most. & i thought the wordplay worked. Your a ball of Fright bitch those faggot traits seem to strike a few Afraid of Ghost, Right Verse? U only come from under ur bed when someone actually writes for you forced/weak setup and wasn't feeling the wordplay on the punch, unlike the previous Got some mixed screws in my head dont make me turn the crazy level up to 10 One punch have your Jaw Sailing across the floor youll never feel the same watching Love n Hiphop again I like the rhyme of it. 2nd time you talkd about punching him tho I have my suspicions u love men your the most feminant of human beings I think they know what u Want Ad so ur gonna leave sore without a Car,Boat or house from that magazine pretty corny but not bad Adverse: You ain't hard you amateur, you're a wobbly battler... Funny he acted like the King of the Street... ......Then we ended up actually seeing a Boston massacre i like the boston massacre concept on the punch; i.m.o. there are better ways to word the setup, i think these 3 lines could be smoother Love and hip hop do not conincide, end of discussion So Tahiry won't be around when this Joe B gets shot down in public Okay Catch Boston while he's hobblin', put him in a headlock Throw em down, curbstomp em until I end up with Red Sox.. def my favorite part of the verse; thought it worked. I bet your arthiritis is kickin in, and the first stages of menopause I mean 35?!...And I thought 'senior member' was a bit too harsh.. tbh this verse is probably far better with audio. tricky rhyme (i'm guessing you squeeze was-a-bit-too?) but even if it's rhymeable, I thought the content of this1 was corny&missed And your game with the women? That shit is feeble right? Only girls I heard 'sippin joe' same ones who can't sleep at night good rhyme but content didn't really hit hard i have to V/Joe Thought he had a few less misses Adverse I know is talented person, but perhaps needs to shake off the rust as far as battle arena Last edited by Pharaohs Army; 04-11-2016 at 07:45 PM.