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Orc
Holding Orc up witha gun, I think it's honestly cute
Dog.. The only time you Pointing the Arm & realllly mean it is the Nazi Salute
Solid start, kinda simple but hit for me
Orc's a vet stopping fiend; adjust the set on the beam
Shadenfreed or Shoddenfroody?! Either way u'll be Pronounced dead on the scene
This was fireeeee. Only criticism i could have is the vet stopping fiend being solely there for the added multi, but it reads funny, kinda like you're talking in limericks lol
Acts like he's blammin n' shooting but aint got a fan, it's amusing
&&&It's pathetic when your last verse got more Nose than a Tic Family Reunion
Punch was lost on me (personal stuff will for a bit i s'pose) but the rhyming / flow of this couplet was amazing
This German loser NEVER drops stronggg with that slick shit
He's got that Blitzrieg style. aka those verses always Bomb with the Quickness
Really dope punch. Setup was a lil lackluster imo
Last time out I had everyoneee laughing at this do or die broad
Now it's less Jokes & more Action when I Shoot you again. that's Suicide Squad
Real nice. flow on point as well
U'll be electrocuted on sight; Orc got nothinggg to prove bruh
Trusttt i'll Charge you by the Minute, & we ain't talking Hush with the Uber
Guessing hush is an uber driver... if that's the case the closer is pretty light. Uber punches been done to death, this one wasn't a clever enough play on it to be effective for me
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Schadenfreude
All u have is saved up lines from long dead boards
bar whore if u dig into yo little Burd chest, I’ll stomp in yours.
Kinda light opening. Starting the second line with bar whore through the flow off for me
Dissed Vic’s lisp an obsessive bad amount, s’all u rapped about
but u’re so bi it’s no surprise u stayed focused on another faggot’s mouth.
Flow in this was really nice. personally not a fan of gay jokes (just usually aren't that funny) but this one specifically was all over the place.
Ya milf mum showed up in lingerie asked to slay & fill her there
I didn’t chill or stare, just left more kids on her teddy than build-a-bear.
lmao. "slay and fill her there" come on man you can get a better setup than that! punch was hilarious tho
I’m a pimp, u a simp, turn ya bitch to a cock-meat chauffeur
Coming to America? Make yo Rose peddle up the block like King Jaffe Joffer.
By the end of this verse i think i'll have a "they're so bad they're good" realization with your setups. Really solid punch
So fast to add up wins, ya narcissism stay being stroked
ya own greatest fanboy - u’re Quicksilver if his AC broke.
lmao
Do fool dirty, even though everything I spit’s clean..
won’t be Ireland’s king after these bars just wash him, that’s Irish Spring.
Solid closer, not crazy but nice play on a personal w/ a punch
Fun little battle here. Overall I have Orc taking it, thought he had cleaner writing and was more consistent throughout. Defo a style clash, shade a humor heavy guy so hits and misses come with the territory, but i thought your verse could have kept up if you worked a bit on some of your iffy setups. I don't know if ya'll have a science for how votes are supposed to go here, so lemme know if i need to change it to a different format or whatever
V/ Orc