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Old 04-09-2016, 10:46 AM   #10
Sharp
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Originally Posted by Lotto Smirk View Post
got no weapon hookups it's all rehearse he's an actress
he got gun links it's cus this fag has to do research for his matches
Ok. Personal element made this hit for me
didn't take him serious,he won't last in these hunger games
I might be mocking jay but it'll be HIS body that's in flames
dope. Nothing else to say lol
price on his head w/ the boys have this gays face blown
money'll bring interest that'll ruin ya life thats a pay day loan
solid
he'll blubber n burn rubber while I'm taking instant aim
but run n get tagged in the back like kids playing children's games
since I'm just feeding you I'm gonna nitpick and say' kids playing children's games' feels slightly redundant, but it doesn't take away from the bar. Personally I don't remember seeing a tag bar so this is nice for me
every win on NC debatable go back to rmbva we're u cheating men
Over here u been battling w/ no bodies n ironically u only gained a rep THERE beating them
honestly note sure what you're going for/if I'm missing something. Could be my bad, but all I'm getting here the statement. 'ironically' makes me think I'm missing something though
Done
Solid verse, mocking Jay was nice and everything but the closer was a hit for me. Sucks shazo no showed you
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