Jay:The BatMan Line Was A Clever concept. The Rangers Fan Line Was Pretty Good Too. Your Flow Was Decent And The Fat Lady Sings Line Is Kinda Played, But Still funny. Overall Good Verse
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Boredom: The First Two Lines Are Pretty Funny, But Pretty predictatble. The Peddle Bike Line Was Funny And Had A Clever concept, And The Gay Bar Line Was Pretty Funny Too. Also I Feel Your Verse Had The Better Flow So...
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