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Old 04-08-2016, 09:21 AM   #1
Artifice
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Join Date: Mar 2016
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Habitat:

Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors

So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace
if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place
Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers
Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter
shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin
If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007

I dug it all but the altar, boy line. dunno, for whatever reason that line just was meh to me. Everything else I liked. Cool wp with kaleidoscope, apparel, and the nameplays (particularly the closer, was pretty dope).

Wanderer:

Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab

See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing
Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting

Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!"
You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet

Those were the lines I dug from u. Cool shit, you had some interesting concepts as well, but i just feel like Habitat executed his a little better. Came across w/ more sting. Good reads from both...

v/ Habitat
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