yo ad, lose those unnecessary quotations around ur shit, capitalize certain words if anything/if u absolutely have to, cuz they just take away from the overall impact of punches
but I gotta say
ad pop up in ur window shit was fire
australian open was dope too, could've been worded a bit better tho
opener had mad potential but u didn't do enough w/ the concept
vs
imaginary lines was pretty decent
plus sized women was simple but funny n worded well
oscar the grouch had potential but it was worded soft, verse kinda fell off after that
I gtg w/ ad here, he just had more firepower in the ones that hit
v/adverse
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