U were at RB flippin NCs archives, u really failed the lime
Give me flack for editing after votes its better than editing every1 else's lines
You're simply a faggot. nobody cares u were missin in action
Bags threw crocheted on his Fedora hat.. u'd think it was stitched in that fashion
--- this was a decent verse and prob would best most dudes, every line hit but the problem is that most were ehh. They were either played or the flip was mediocre. Crocheted coulda been fire with a better flip.
Vs.
--- I like all bar's line except the closer, it came off as awkward. Jillian was good, sonned in reg aye was cool, infancy was nice, lines revisited was a good personal, crash bandicoot was cool, unbreakable bond shoulda been set up better imo with a ref to the movie, only reason I knew what u was talkin about is cuz of the gif u had in ur sig or whatever lol. Overall tho nice verse.
V. Cronuts
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