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Breh321 · 05-11-2013, 08:39 PM

I like it, the paragraph was well done even though usually people tend to fuck it up
Seems like a short burst of thought, so for that it was good
If you took more time to refine it it'd prolly come out better but for what it was its a good piece

05-11-2013, 08:39 PM	#7
Breh321 Junior Member Join Date: May 2013 Posts: 29 Rep Power: 37	I like it, the paragraph was well done even though usually people tend to fuck it up Seems like a short burst of thought, so for that it was good If you took more time to refine it it'd prolly come out better but for what it was its a good piece __________________ im doin something these wack battle cats ain't really used to, see this is rappin