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Old 04-07-2016, 08:12 AM   #11
riffic
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Habitat

Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors
- pretty cool wordplay & the imagery was good.
I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way
Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away
So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace
if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place
- gay jokes <<
Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers
Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter
- tired wordplay & the rhyme isn't very good
shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin
If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007
- okay punch. wording was kinda weird.

Wanderer:

Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab
- haaa I liked this. nice inner multi.
put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame
Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game
- cool concept, weird wording
See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing
Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting
- it's good but I've heard this before
You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you
Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to
- gay jokes <<
Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!"
You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet
- again, it's good, but I've heard this before (a lot)

vote Wanderer
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