Joe:
Your chick said Joe i hate when you drink your voilent and dont act the same
Gave her two choices get a nice Buzzer Beater then bitch spoke to me during the Villanova game
- See what you were going for but just didn't think it was that cool, plus was just a standard word play, nothing personal or hard hitting.
You never tame pussy so smashing theres not a shot in the dark
After i pop a Cork, Screw you call ur wife to tell her your having a blast at the Six Flags Theme Park
- Ehhh
No sparks flying out the barrel of the gun can tell you the type that never shoots
Searching for Prey? Only call yourself a Hunter cuz you'd probably rock the fuck out a pair of Womens boots
- It's aight.
Broke as fuck hes been taking commutes on public transportation for years
If someone asked if he loved the new Metro look fag would trim his eyebrows and fix his hair
- Nah. Just ain't hitting
Not a care in the world if i slapped him i bet America would love to witness an open hand
Go ahead and tell everyone he fights for his Country fag has proof from all his pictures of the Zach Brown Band
- Kinda see the angle but didn't feel it.
Funny how u plan ur living conditions and sex life dumb fuck aint doing logical thinking
When ur desperate think "X gon gonna give it to ya" thats cuz she looks like Melissa Mccarthy lip syncing
- Decent. Your best bar
Art:
u got a David Spade steez, i rock Chris Farley the whole verse
put u below turf with the Tommy Boy... it's a joy to show Joe Dirt
- Cool opener
this place of text makes u vexed, u straight up stressed dude
at times more of a whiner than North Carolina... lettin' the Paige upset u
- It's alright
some sage advice, u think u throw heat but u ain't that nice
3 strikes Boston's out, my shit's money like David... cuz J paid the Price
- Ehh
JB's starves for a win but only stomachs more defeat
cuz A&W sounds better... plus it's another place he can't afford to eat
- Okay-ish
Rip Torn's what i've done to u, take u back to school again
& teach this Average Joe like Dodgeball legend Patches O'Houlihan
- I like it to be honest.
on thin ice, Boston Bruin awful shots tryin' to win it
but once the gloves drop u're put in a box for a lot longer than five minutes
- Nice closer imo
Art took this pretty convincingly in my book, Joe, I think you would benefit more from taking a more direct attack approach. I think you get so caught up with trying to think up original concepts that you get too outside of the box and it becomes a reach. You just got to focus more into nameplay and personals as opposed to what you've been doing. Keep doing your thing though, good bout fellas.
Vote - Art
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