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Old 04-06-2016, 11:08 PM   #10
Adverse
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Hab:
Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors
^ Thought this was cool, but I also think it was sort of a reach, but cool none the less

I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way
Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away
^ idk didn't really hit for me but was okay

So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace
if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place
^ hmm alright

Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers
Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter
^ I like this wordplay

shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin
If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007
^ yeah this was cool too

Wander:
Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab
^okay-ish

put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame
Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game
^ kinda iffy to me, but alright

See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing
Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting
^ I feel it.

You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you
Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to
^ Not too fresh a concept, or that hard either.

Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!"
You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet
^ thought this was alright too.

I think I got Hab taking this, just a better overall verse, Wander had a lot of cool concepts but just didn't execute them that well to be honest. So I got Hab, cool drops to both though!

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