An aight battle, but Joe u're wording's way too stretched, I guess u're rusty, but get ya shit across more clearly & concise next battle. As for the concepts, a couple had potential, but again that wording ruined 'em. DELIVERY IS EVERYTHING. Whether it be actually spitting, recording, performing or writing.
Artifice u had quite a bit of played material, but the opener & Patches were the standouts. Avoid the obvious flips as much as possible, like all of the sports referances u made. Plus his name's Joe Boston I'm pretty sure that shit's been flipped in every matter possible, so that didn't do much damage.
Overall despite the flaws in each of your verses I'm giving it to ARTIFICE, JB the wording just really fucked u up here.
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