[SHECK WES]

Your chick said Joe i hate when you drink your voilent and dont act the same
Gave her two choices get a nice Buzzer Beater then bitch spoke to me during the Villanova game
mm nah man this wasn't good
You never tame pussy so smashing theres not a shot in the dark
After i pop a Cork, Screw you call ur wife to tell her your having a blast at the Six Flags Theme Park
that wp was forced here and hurt the potential of this
No sparks flying out the barrel of the gun can tell you the type that never shoots
Searching for Prey? Only call yourself a Hunter cuz you'd probably rock the fuck out a pair of Womens boots
meh, wording needs fixing here and this is kinda stretched
Broke as fuck hes been taking commutes on public transportation for years
If someone asked if he loved the new Metro look fag would trim his eyebrows and fix his hair
alright I'll give you this one
Not a care in the world if i slapped him i bet America would love to witness an open hand
Go ahead and tell everyone he fights for his Country fag has proof from all his pictures of the Zach Brown Band
cringed here
Funny how u plan ur living conditions and sex life dumb fuck aint doing logical thinking
When ur desperate think "X gon gonna give it to ya" thats cuz she looks like Melissa Mccarthy lip syncing
idk man this wasn't good either imo


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put u below turf with the Tommy Boy... it's a joy to show Joe Dirt
idk why the first line didn't paste but this line was solid
this place of text makes u vexed, u straight up stressed dude
at times more of a whiner than North Carolina... lettin' the Paige upset u
ehh decent at best here
some sage advice, u think u throw heat but u ain't that nice
3 strikes Boston's out, my shit's money like David... cuz J paid the Price
wording all over the place here
JB's starves for a win but only stomachs more defeat
cuz A&W sounds better... plus it's another place he can't afford to eat
nah
Rip Torn's what i've done to u, take u back to school again
& teach this Average Joe like Dodgeball legend Patches O'Houlihan
haha this was cool
on thin ice, Boston Bruin awful shots tryin' to win it
but once the gloves drop u're put in a box for a lot longer than five minutes
ok not bad, some might not get it tho


Alright. Joe you been dropping some good stuff in the 1-2 over at RB but seems like you lost it all in the verse tbh, I know you have better shit than this and I've seen it first hand. This week wasn't your best verse and it definitely hurt you. Art had a few good ones, the opener was tough, average joe was good and the closer was too. Not a bad verse, much better than you dropped last week. This is pretty much one sided here. Also one more thing, Joe if you shorten your lines a little I think they'd have a harder impact, cause reading a stretched line is always gonna take away from the sting, maybe that's just me idk.

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