Symetrik:
Confused how you wrote a about a dude.. besides that, this was still enjoyable.
Quote:
her head rush red but her eyes spoke simply that she loved her big dummy.
his face scrunched, making monkey noises at his little monkey girl.
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This part was dope. Not even the rhyme of it or anything, just the.. realness of it. Short & sweet verse, good read. Thanks for not annoying me with your rhyming.
2K:
Opener didn’t rhyme. You be frosting sym? Is this a battle? And, what the fuck does frosting someone mean?
Also, it didn’t rhyme.
Conatating? That whole bar left me with the Huhhh face. How old are you? I remember seeing you saying you were kinda’ young. Anyways, I get a feeling Jesodist has a better grasp at the English language than you currently do. I’m soooo confused. It’s like you’ll throw in a line that kind of makes it feel like you’re about to actually write to a topic, but then “diss” him. And, I say “diss” in quotes because for a diss / battle verse, this shit is basura. << That word, is Spanish for trash.
I’m gonna stop reading there. I don’t know what 2K was trying to do, but it ain’t working for me. Also, I feel like ya’ll just sugar coat shit with him for entertainment’s sake.
Anyways, I would finish reading his verse but I feel like I’d just end up being a total dick to the kid. Thanks for the easy vote though.
vSymetrik