Hab
Join Date: Mar 2016
Posts: 24
Rep Power:25526
Got him locked in my sights, no way he can get to cover
When the bullet kaleidoscope has me seeing a whole mess of colors
I like the wordplay collide a scope but came off more of a,statement then a directed punch
I won't harp on u for being a faggot, u were born that way
Some things you just can't altar, boy.. like having ur childhood torn away
Seen this wordplay done before nice flip on it
So keep the gay shit to urself, ur wish is something I won't embrace
if Wanderlust is directed at me, I'll dispatch his body parts all over tha place
Dope nameplay and direct punch
Cannons at the ready... got dat itch in both of my fingers
Trusttt that Apparel have you covered... n' I ain't talkin bout' winter
I like the wordplay and all but i felt wording wise couldve been more polished
shit can get messy kid, you should be stressin
If wanderlei a hand on me I'll end his Pride like it was 2007
Nice nameplay
Wander
Crack addiction mean your mind's weak, in mine I'm blowing up like jihad
After this battle we'll see Habit Broken Like ur fam were hoping when they sent you to rehab
Setup and finish didnt tie in together both were irrelevant with each other
put a hit out on u. We don't even have to meet.. goons'll sink this lame
Have you not knowin who I am wit paper on ur head, shit's a drinking game
I liked the direction of the punch but paper on the head not sure what drinking game reference ties into it
See I've lived a life of thuggin. run ins with the law is a common thing
Only Police Record you ever had was a track in the 80's sung by Sting
Lol ok better reference good flip
You've never ruffled anyone's feathers & I don't go easy, let me warn you
Your definition of Manhandle is the fat around your boyfriends hips you hold on to
Played
Bookin' a duel wit wan? Soon you'll be begging me, "please forget!"
You can race to reach the tec but I'm always 1st to have arms raised like teachers pet
Wording was bad
Hab has some creative nameplays and some better of attempts i felt he couldve polished up better. Wandee not much from him wording hurt him a ton only line that stood out was the Police Record line.
V/Hab
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