[Mr. J]

Razah, I really enjoyed your short but sweet approach
it really helps you capitalize on the use of your smooth flow
you capture some interesting moments between 2 friends
I enjoyed the beginning due to how you painted influence
I bark/you bark that whole feeling of the connection is key
if you didnt follow Pinots formula this would be perfection to me
the whole vibe just sets the tone & buries you in emotion.
although I could do without the belly rubs & crinkled noses.
either way your laziness still holds its own against seasoned writers
if you wrote longer than 10 lines Im sure you'd still bring that fire.

Frank, as the season progresses you seem to get more focused
your attachment to the same rhyme scheme is one of the dopest
its rare to see anyone execute at you caliber of rhyme after rhyme
I will admit in the beginning I was annoyed by the passenger lines
but I know its not easy giving names to people who dont push the plot
after getting deeper into your story I eventually shook it off.
the way you strategically place each word puts you on a higher echelon
although a few missteps often keep you from exquisite perfection dawg
either way your story seems well developed & brings impressive quality
as soon as everyone gets over your line length I believe youll have a cult following..
nice work.

v/Frank, with his consistent scheme & intricate prose its obvious
Razah wrote a nice short story, but Frank brought story godliness
the fact Frank touched on so much with such a tragic theme is sick
Razah built a connection & thats where most tragedy lives....
problem is Frank out wrote him with a stronger verse & snatched the win.
nice battle fellas...Frank...Ill see you again