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Old 04-04-2016, 12:17 AM   #2
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I like the way you write my dude, the way you string your sentences together is cool. Even if this was a freeverse and you had no real intention of bringing the concept further than this verse, i'd like to read a sequel, and see how the story progresses and ends. It was a nice piece though
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