^^That scheme’s a fail, no doubt. Wouldn’t rhyme if ya wail or shout
Seems we got such a Cash flow problem...even the Fed couldn’t bail him out
Ya style reminds me of Resin’s, except where he roasts ya just swoon..
..it’s such a ‘feminine remake of a classic’...ya oughta write the new Ghostbusters tune
Too weak for this match, as I sweep the clash you’ll hide at home eating trash..
Guess we’re alike after all: cus while you’re cleaning out cookies, I’ll be deleting ***he
Ya fell from heavyweight to paper champ. Fact. This story is funny..
Cash went from gold to paper so seamlessly...thought he was re-enacting the history of money
I got a dick like the biggest club, ya girl cried as it got thick with blood
...I left her pussy ‘ripped as proof of entry’. Like a fucking ticket stub.
alllll of these were creative/good man. the wording is really oldschool, it needs to tighten up and modernise and that'd make them hit wayyy harder. just add a little more swagger to it so that it can't be seen as bland. match up the syllables when you're rhyming too that's a big difference. overall was a dope verse i'm just trying to help out
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"Hey, guys lets try this cool complicated thing!" Shut the fuck up...Could you be more annoying?
It looks like you already tried this in your verse and your words were "weak", "forced", and "boring"
Your chick's yelling at me "Don't Pull out!" A seed?...She's like fuck it, whatever
She's screaming at YOU to stay inside too...so you aren't seen in public together
^^^ simple as fuck, easy to do, BUT the wording makes it hit
Ex just split...Now he's depressed and shit to the point he might stalk her.
It's quite awkward....dude turned blue and started touching more boys than a White Walker
The WHOLE LEAGUE is better than this guy...I guess that he can try though
Motherfucker, you couldn't be a Season Champ if you stole the recipe from Diode
You're not ACTUALLY gettin' paid, B...Cash is getting gravy
Broke bitch don't even understand the Term Paper...the only one he getting a Pass from is the ladies
your wording is probably my favourite to read now that i think about it. maybe trim them down a little but it's fluid and there's a lot of swagger to it. you're like a young Orc. haha nah but the way you execute your bars is what makes them hit.
overall i think the style clash is what made this easier than it should have been to vote on. i warmed to Cash's style so it made his bars hit way harder than Toil's did. Toil still done really good, but my preference is
Cashius
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