03-31-2016, 04:31 PM
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#9
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Senior Member
Join Date: Jul 2013
Posts: 1,509
Battle Record: 51-29
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Rep Power: 20137909
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Originally Posted by Destroyer
Des is a lethal threat, & this faggot thinks he the best
u got Freud right in ur name, so watch me serve up some ego death
This is ok. Concept is nice, but execution lacked IMO.
I'm nice w/these hands, but I'll still cap em right where he stands
these gats'll have u spin round back where u started - I call em recycling cans
I like this.
scrape up an amount to pay, but ur still gonna know how outlaws play
cuz even if I see Schad dough, he's going in a hole like its Groundhog Day
Ok but you could've took a different angle I think.
I'm taking ur girl too, & gonna make her my ho... u copy?
so ur bout to be 'good at this jerky thing' like u took up diode's new hobby
Lol not feeling this.
to be frank, I'll climb ur castle walls, & u won't see me coming, sir
tear the flesh from ur head, & leave ur skull on ur chest - that's the punisher
Eh.
got more tech, & I can't fuckin wait to see this whore flex
cuz my gun a teacher's pen. the red marks it leaves'll make that core wrecked
Usually red marks are left when the answer is wrong. But it's ok.
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Orc
Once again..
Beat Me in the 1st pic battle I ever had to write or recite,
let’s have another pick battle: choose how I’ll kill u - then fight for ya life.
Not feeling this.
A stepping stone to get me to the chip & trust I’ll belong..
u’re never touching the throne, next chip u see’ll be for a customer’s phone.
Chip / Ship as in Champ? Nah.
Ya wife loves sucking dick, spits swallows slurps burps flem
swear soon as I unzip, that bitch’s head & neck snaps like Earthworm Jim.
Not feeling.
In ya house, murk u & ya spouse w/o waking the neighbors
use a old snub same age as u, that’s the 40/40 club w/o making the Majors.
I like this.
But Ion’t even need to let the tool bang to leave dude slain
show up one dark night & put a bat across his chest, now he Bruce Wayne.
I liked this.
Or better yet Bruce Jenner, fag so flaming he’s half-cinder,
mad tender, if ever this lame talk bout letting the thang off, it’s transgender.
Flow is good, but not feeling the punch.
..BODY.
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I got Schad edging this with 2 quotes to 1. It was close though. I've seen better from both, honestly.
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