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symetrik · 03-29-2016, 02:02 AM

for adonis, I really enjoyed the first half. quick subtle formation of the subject showing his sadistic tendencies rapidly evolved into a climax (though not the expected one).
the second half was an interesting idea but I didn't quite grasp the overall of it. was it becoming his job? etc. kinda lost me on this part.

for buddha, it was all well tied together. kept even keel with winter and cold and broken body. started really strong, started to lose speed for me though. tied together nicely in a way, as it became a bit more hectic of a read and finalized with admittance of being a chaotic creature.

mvgt - @UnbornBuddha godcomplex whatever

03-29-2016, 02:02 AM	#6
symetrik Senior Member Join Date: Sep 2013 Posts: 710 Battle Record: 5-7 Rep Power: 12429299	for adonis, I really enjoyed the first half. quick subtle formation of the subject showing his sadistic tendencies rapidly evolved into a climax (though not the expected one). the second half was an interesting idea but I didn't quite grasp the overall of it. was it becoming his job? etc. kinda lost me on this part. for buddha, it was all well tied together. kept even keel with winter and cold and broken body. started really strong, started to lose speed for me though. tied together nicely in a way, as it became a bit more hectic of a read and finalized with admittance of being a chaotic creature. mvgt - @UnbornBuddha godcomplex whatever Last edited by symetrik; 03-29-2016 at 02:41 AM.