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Old 03-28-2016, 12:36 AM   #10
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Yeah it's a cool piece. Those first few lines the imagery gave me chills. But the overall track sounded a little bland to me, lyrically and flow wise was very nice to me just felt like it needed a little more POP as an overall song, but it definietly wasn't bad bro keep doing you
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