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Originally Posted by Strange
Newton running & closer.
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For such a short verse, this read as rushed, lazy in both wording & punch impact.
versus
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Originally Posted by Blam Newton
Jerry Lawler & Chris Walken.
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Like yo opponent, your wording read as if u just keyed & posted w/o editing/rewrites.
Overall I edge this one to
BLAM NEWTON, tho both were below their own standards, Blam was slightly better.